Do you know best criminal in the world? Everyone will say killing,kidnap ect. The best criminal is what Kony did. However, first you have to know who is Kony. Kony is a person who kidnap boys for soilder and girls for sexually harass. don't you think this is really bad?
Therefore one person who called Jason made a movie named Kony2012. Today,my topic is 'Is Kony 2012 is right?' and I agree that make criminal famous is right. Do you know why, because of 3 reason. 1st we can stop criminal little bit,2nd we can save children and its parents and last of all we can know is something happening around us.
The reason we can stop criminal is the people who are going to stop the criminal. Do you know why? They will be afraid that they will be famous being a theif or something. So HAHA for them. Also someoe kill some people who was already doing some criminal will be afraid and do not do it again.
The reason we can save children and its parents is if we make Kony famous then if he will be scared so he will be scared and do not kidnap children. If it happen like that then children will not kill their family so they will not be sad. Therefore they can make very good family making Kony famous.
The reason we know what is happening around us by a machine. They will prepare alot of things to catch Kony. Therefore we will be safe when we know what is hapening around us. That will be very good. We can catch Kony and we can be safe. How good!!!
To conculd, i wish you will help catching Kony. Even I said this things, but there are very very very many reasons is Kony 2012 right. I wish my essay will help you think making Kony famous is right.
THANK YOU FOR READING OR LISTENING TO MY SPEECH!!!!
This is a good start to writing an argumentative essay. You need to work on a few things. When wiritng an essay don't use 1st instead write the word "first". Also, you need to include the opposing ideas and rebute them.
ReplyDeleteFinally, you should include the "Kony 2012" video as well. Good luck!