Friday, August 10, 2012

Reflective Essay Spring


Hello~bloggers!!!My name is Ashley as you know. Today I will tell you about a child monk who did not know about life. The adult monk let him know for real. However, the boy killed two animals. Luckly, one animal didn't die. Do you know why he regretted? It is because the adult monk did the same to the boy. I learned that animals and plant's life are important,too.

My feeling about the adult monk is that he is correct, because if he didn't do the thing to the little monk, then the little monk would not regretted. I was a little same as the child monk.  My personal example is when I was a little child. I stold candies, but I did not know stealling is bad. When my mom knew about it she steal my favorite things and I knew a how bad  stealing is, so I stopped to stealing candies. From then on I don't steal anything that want. I just use my things.

To conculde, letting someone learn by doing the same thing is good. Also I learned that doing bad things to other people,animals and things are bad. also life are very important than anything else in the world. Therefore, we have to save someone's or something's life is precious.
THANKYOU FOR READING OR LISTENING!!!

2 comments:

  1. The font is extremely hard to read. Would you change it to something more legible?
    The ideas and the necessary content are all there. I need you to lengthen it a bit, though. Think about how you could explain everything a bit further.

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  2. This is a good essay but it is too short. Try to add more personal experiences to your essay. Good luck!

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